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@ 2006-04-21 - 16:07:32
Did you miss me?
Well, it turned out that I had way too much material. Once the online experiment was over and I started messing about with the results it gave and comparing them to the results I'd found from elsewhere, my word count shot up. The result was that I had to cut and cut and cut some more.
I imagine that this is what real writers have to do. It was hard, hard work; and the reason why you've not heard from me for so long.
First I had to go through and, "Torri'r garw" as we say in Wales - break up the easy stuff. This involved simply going through every section I'd written and asking, "Does this really contribute to the aim of the project?". It meant saying goodbye to some close friends. For example, there was a section explaining the legal background to the genesis of .NET, with Microsoft losing to Sun in court and, basically, taking their ball home with them. I thought it read rather well: but this is not a project about software legalities, interesting as they are, so it had to go.
Once that was done, the next process was to go through every sentence asking, "Can I say this in fewer words?". Very often, you can. And very often it makes the meaning clearer as well.
Lastly, there remained the process of examining every adjective and every adverb and asking, "Is this really necessary? Will the meaning change or be less clear if it's taken out?" It's amazing what you can get rid of in this way. But it is hard, hard work. Did I already say that?
Having got the word count down to something reasonable, all the loose ends had to be tidied. Every reference has to be checked and put into the correct format (Harvard, if you're interested). There's an abstract to write, acknowledgements, tables of contents, lists of tables, lists of figures, appendices ...
And then you have to make sure that the formatting is exactly to the specification demanded by the university.
I'm just about there. I have a few more appendices to sort out; and I've got to make sure the page numbering works correctly and is in the correct format; and I have to add the page numbers to the table of contents and the lists of tables and figures. These are things to do at the very end.
By the time it's finished it will be well over two hundred pages in length (including all the appendices and what have you). But the end is in sight. I'm nearly there.
The deadline for submission, which is done electronically so there are no worries about postal delays and so on, is 28th April 2006. I should just make it. I'm off work until then anyway, so I've no excuse.
My supervisor seems happy with it, too. So I really can do no more.
Sorry for the rambling tone of this entry. But I thought that those of you who've been following along deserved an update.
Who knows, I might have completed it all by the time I make another entry? Fingers crossed.